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Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on Apr 17, 2008 0:01:41 GMT -5
I struggle with their
proper word use
that strangles with
absurd, obtuse
abstractions that
perturb, confuse
any point to the point
I must cut loose
the snare of care
delegates abuse
as warranted
widespread wisdom.
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Apr 17, 2008 7:13:12 GMT -5
Your trademark cleverness is present, Rick. Good stuff.
David
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Post by ramadevi on Apr 17, 2008 7:37:12 GMT -5
Ditto David's response.
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Apr 17, 2008 8:48:08 GMT -5
You tell it like it is, Rick, with nary an extraneous word, and fine tight rhyme. Bravo.......good to see you posting after what seems like a mighty long time. Jon
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Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on Apr 19, 2008 16:49:43 GMT -5
Best title award. LOL You still rule the the language world, Rick. Ron
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Post by LynnDoiron on Apr 19, 2008 17:37:25 GMT -5
No Noose is What Noose is Knotted Like Deeze Days.
Like, your poem makes good cents to me.
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