Commerce, GA

[mfwilkie]

The commuter rail splits Front Street in two;
nothing to you, but like my favorite town
in Georgia bisected by the activity of tracks,
it stimulates a laid-back caution to progress.

On the slow ride home, I hear Spring express
herself with a multi-lingual chorus of bird-speak;
fine, fine sound fed by sun this Sunday morning.
Amen. Amen. A...men.

[David Nelson Bradsher]

I like it, Maggie, save for the feminine personification of Spring. I think "itself" works better for some reason.

[Marion Poirier]

Maggie, I like the idea of spring being
a female as we usually think of winter as being
a male - old man winter. Seasons are not
capitalized, but I've seen it by poets
so often that I'm assuming you are using
poetic license. Love the poem. Marion

[pelos]

interesting poem - I like it - a little home while onthe road at least
that is what took from it. I also like the feminine of Spring - works
very well here. pelos