Ron Buck (halfshell)
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Post by Ron Buck (halfshell) on May 12, 2008 9:47:28 GMT -5
Psalm of the Sikh .
If I were true to myself, remaining selfless would be easy. The length of my shanks would be endless long without axis;
soon enough, becoming a wobbly man on stilts.
All the clowns of Christendom would frolic at my feet.
And though I hollered down, far and wide, my spindles for release, you would never hear what I have felt, nor the self I seek.
Better not to be myself, stumble on my knobblies, scrape the earth’s uneven chest, and mock myself without regret for entertaining sceptic hobbies, unbecoming
to a child of heaven.
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Post by mfwilkie on May 12, 2008 10:06:42 GMT -5
Interesting, piece, Ron.
Do you need the comma after hobbies?
without regret for entertaining sceptic hobbies, unbecoming
to a child of heaven.
Maggie
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