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Jan 22, 2008 16:25:13 GMT -5
Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Jan 22, 2008 16:25:13 GMT -5
Brutal, brother. Thank God for the channel-changer, eh.
Love it all, Johnny, but especially the first stanza's music.
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Jan 22, 2008 17:28:56 GMT -5
Post by MichaelFirewalker on Jan 22, 2008 17:28:56 GMT -5
I agree with David, John----you are that devastating combination of an acid tongue and a golden heart...
love that aftershave subtext...
michael
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"What is genius?but the power of expressing a new individuality?" Elizabeth Barrett Browning
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Jan 22, 2008 20:59:26 GMT -5
Post by storyweaver on Jan 22, 2008 20:59:26 GMT -5
OUCh, This is good!
I agree, the opening is KILLER!
G.
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Jan 23, 2008 11:39:37 GMT -5
Post by Tina (Firefly) on Jan 23, 2008 11:39:37 GMT -5
OOh, ooh. This is brutal on the heart, but more than that, it is.. to lift a word..typical in way too many places. Johnny, you truly have a penchant for this kind of subtext. As a playwright and a drama director, I LOVE this because it is the way we live, is it not?? This is dynamite. Tina
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Jan 23, 2008 16:27:13 GMT -5
Post by johnnysaturn on Jan 23, 2008 16:27:13 GMT -5
Thanks again to everyone for your kindness in contributing your encouraging comments. I envy you your avocation Tina; theatre is my favourite art form. And Michael... "tart, with a heart of gold", yeah that's me.
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