Sweet Pea

[Ron Buck (halfshell)]

Sweet Pea
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The Indigo girl shifts body and soul;
dreams and moments unfastened.

She finds her pillow, sprinkled with flowers;
tucks it under the coo of her chin.

All the world waits, and yet, she hesitates.

The sun dances within the glow of leaves
unfurling; faint voices of birds
come and go across the meadow.

Yellow tabby at her feet, purrs and purrs.

She pulls above her head the all-white quilt,
and beckons morning to go easy;
just long enough to tie up loose ends.[/size]

[Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47]

Very soothing morning poem, Ron. I enjoyed the ease of expression, the imagery, the dreams and moments personified.
It is good to spend a few moments upon awakening just to ease into consciousness and be........aware of one's surroundings, appreciative for them.

Yes.....the world can wait a while..........

Enjoyable read. Thanks.

[LynnDoiron]

Favorite phrase -- the coo of her chin. Particularly like the magic that happens between "coo" and the double use of purrs a bit later; how the animal comforts of a good snooze come to bear. Places within this not as wonderful for me, but difficult to pinpoint or say why. But, for what I find quite remarkable here, makes the whole well worth the read. A small treasure, I think.

[wavemaker9 (Rick D.)]

Few can reach this level of endearment Ron, without getting mushy. This waddles up innocently and says love me.

[Sherry Thrasher]

This is the first day of spring, full of coos and chirping birds. You fail to disappoint and I know that I am in for a poetic treat when you've posted. You are unique. I enjoyed the gentle rhyme this offers. Well done.

Sherry