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Post by mfwilkie on Jun 10, 2008 8:18:31 GMT -5
strikes, and your heart cries out for a mercy, begging the inevitable to let the years pass as planned, to let love have its voice, its eye- to-eye, hand to cheek affirmations of intimacy.
That everything happens for a reason is not something a heart without its purpose finds easy to believe.
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Post by LynnDoiron on Jun 10, 2008 19:36:29 GMT -5
NOW this works ABsolutely for me; now the opening stanza pinches my heart; either I was very dense this a.m. or you've made some very deft changes.
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Post by mfwilkie on Jun 10, 2008 19:41:16 GMT -5
I'm likin' that deft changes, chicky!!!
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Post by Jo Lynn Ehnes on Jun 10, 2008 19:52:00 GMT -5
That's very good, Mag.
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