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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Jan 24, 2008 17:31:51 GMT -5
perhaps we are flame all along
perhaps we burn in silence yearn for perfect song
and when we hear it sung perhaps we leap to feel taste breathe its wild fire
engulfing anyone who sings magic that can heal
anyone who dares take us higher
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Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on Jan 24, 2008 21:31:07 GMT -5
Just an idea about the closing, Michael, of course I may be wrecking your voice so don't hesitate to ignore this. Ron
engulfing anyone who sings magic that heals, anyone who dares take us higher.
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Post by alfredo on Jan 25, 2008 0:07:55 GMT -5
I dooooooooooo like Rons close
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Jan 25, 2008 20:12:52 GMT -5
Ron and Alfredo...yes, I agree...Ron's sequence is superior...thanks Ron...I have used your idea...almost, anyway...and like it much better this way...
hugs michael
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