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Post by LynnDoiron on Jan 28, 2008 10:55:30 GMT -5
No complaints about this one. great read -- thanks.
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Jan 28, 2008 22:57:23 GMT -5
seems to me destiny drops more stitches than it catches...
love "the burnished rhetoric of penitance"...
the poem is tight, terse, and tense...
michael
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Jan 29, 2008 7:12:16 GMT -5
Johnny, I agree with the rest on this one. Nice, tight read.
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Post by Ken_Nye on Jan 29, 2008 7:44:45 GMT -5
I do too. I usually don't care for non-punctuated verse, but that doesn't faze me in this one. This is just a well crafted little splice of life. Love it.
Ken
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